When you are trying to write a poem, you need to first learn 〝HOW TO WRITE A POEM〞.First, you ask questions about the thing you want to write in the poem.Second, you write the idea of something you will write in the poem.Third, you will use a Cluster Map to organize your thoughts & ideas. 
                                                        

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  • Nov 22 Wed 2006 22:32
  • Poem 3

                                                     The dog in the bog
 

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  • Nov 22 Wed 2006 22:27
  • Poem 2

                                                      The bug in the fog
 

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         Once upen a time,there was a family called Canny. The father died. The little brother was called Jack Canny,his older sister was called Minne Canny,the mother was called Cathy Canny.
     One day when the Canny are cleaning their house Cathy the mother felt sick so she called Minne to come and help. While the mother was resting Jack walked here with his fishbowl.Suddenly,he didn't saw the water on the floor and he stumbled over it and the glass were into Jack's eye.Minnie and her mother quickly helped Jack to the hospital and Jack was hurt.After the accident Jack will walk carefully and never stumbled again!

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              When I look out the window today,I saw many many children playing in the morning. Suddenly I hear strange sound and I look behind the bushes.I see a horn beetle and a praying mantis fighting for the died butterfly. The butterfly looks beautiful the horn beetle is brown,and praying mantis is light green like a leaf on the tree. I think I am very lucky to see insects fighting.
      I hope the praying mantis will win because then the praying mantis can both eat two insects and it will be full.   

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           有一天,媽媽在公共廁所,看到一位老婆婆,上完廁所出來,裙子沒有穿好,有一邊的裙子竟然夾在內褲裡,內褲就大剌剌的露在外面,當時都沒有人告訴她,只有媽媽跑去跟她說:「歐巴桑,妳的裙子沒拉好。」只見歐巴桑把裙子拉好和媽媽道謝後,就走出去了,真是好糗哦!

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      暑假我們到美國,有一天我們去大賣場買東西,逛著逛著,我們就走到結帳區,前方有一個美國男生,雙手拿著一個大箱子頂在頭上,他穿著海灘褲,走著走著,他的褲子突然滑落下來,令人驚訝的是,他竟然沒有穿內褲,我們在後面看到他的屁股,大家都在偷笑,只見他趕快把箱子放下,把褲子穿好,若無其事的走了出去,真是糗死了

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         有一天,媽媽在路邊的水果車買鳳梨,那天飄著毛毛細雨,突然傳來擴音喇叭的聲音「你不要在買啦!」剛開始,媽媽東張西望,不知道發生什麼事了,後來往後一看,警車上的警察瞪著她,又再講了一遍:「不要再買啦!就是有妳們這些人愛買,他們才會出來賣。」他講完就走下警車,媽媽趕緊跟老闆結帳,非常尷尬的飛奔回來,當時媽媽真糗

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           今年中秋節,我們連續兩天都烤肉,第一次是回奶奶家,和親戚們一起烤肉;第二次是去同學家,他們家是別墅型的新房子,還有後院,所以邀請了好幾個同學一起去玩。
    中秋節那天,奶奶準備了好多食物,但一開始要生火時,無論爸爸怎麼煽火,好像怎麼樣都沒有辦法把火給生起來,後來才發現是叔公家借來的烤肉爐,下方沒有通風孔,難怪木炭一直沒有辦法燃燒起來,姑姑趕快又去新買了一個烤肉爐,才開始重新生火烤肉。特別的是,因為爸爸家的親戚,都是並排住在一起,一戶接著一戶,所以每年一起烤肉時,燈火通明,小朋友跑來跑去,特別好玩。

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           今天下午媽媽帶我去新舞臺欣賞紙風車劇團的新戲「武松打虎」,特別的是,這一場是由台灣IBM慶祝五十周年的愛心義演活動,小阿姨既是IBM的員工,也是他們公司志工社的社長,這一場是由他們員工認購門票,把收入全部捐給外縣市偏遠山區的學校。
    這一齣戲的內容,是在敘述生活在景陽崗下的村民生活的並不快樂,每天都為了一點芝麻小事鬥嘴,最近又因為老虎出沒而慌慌張張。這一天,武松、武十、武百三兄弟來到客棧休息,碰巧遇到鎮上富翁馬員外徵求打虎英雄,並賞賜一百萬兩黃金。在一陣混亂之中,膽小如鼠的武氏三兄弟莫名其妙的變成打虎英雄,只好無奈的上山抓老虎,在景陽崗上,三兄弟東躲西藏,只希望老虎不要出現,但偏偏這時候老虎出現了,後來才發現這隻老虎,不僅可愛而且吃素,為了不讓村民繼續誤會老虎,他們決定帶老虎下山,讓村民和老虎和平相處。

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